Hello everyone and welcome to my very first ever go at Wednesday Briefs Flash Fiction. I was given many options to inspire a Brief. But I chose to go with the two photos below. I hope you enjoy the first part of "LADY" and would LOVE to hear your thoughts :)
Whenever the moon is full and shining at its brightest, I
always dream of myself, basking in the colors and brilliance of a rainbow. In
these dreams, a man always appears, right when the rainbow disappears. He
always walks over to the crystal clear pool of water and strips down to his
skin. Baring a perfectly sculpted masterpiece for my eyes to feast upon,
appreciate and remember.
Oh, how
I yearn to go to him while he’s under the falls, bathing in nature’s finest,
purest of waters. To bring his magnificent body flush against mine. I envision
caressing his tanned flesh and licking every sparkle of water from all of the
warmest places on his body. I would start from the top: his ears, chin, cheeks
and lips—and work my way down. Never getting past his center, because that’s
where I know he will get the most pleasure from my attentions.
The sounds he makes are just as arousing as he is. The sighs of his pleasure at times would seem as if he’s in pain. I would take away that glorious pain by giving him even more exhilarating pleasure. Then, he’ll whisper my name, so sweet from his lips, so sensual, so erotic and thrilling as he’d reach his completion, feeding me the finest nectar I’ve ever tasted.
This
dream is always so very intoxicating. It makes me feel so powerful, so
satisfied. But alas, it’s all only a dream. All of it, something I can never
have and never experience—it hurts me to my core. I feel empty and alone.
Especially, the times when he whispers, “Lady.” I don’t know who he calls from
those full lips. But I want it to be me. I always want it to be me…
During the times I have these dreams, I embody the form of a goddess. I have white blonde hair that flows to my knees, the bluest of eyes and succulent lips-the type of lips only meant for kissing and sucking. I possess two perfectly pert breasts with the pinkest of nipples that would tempt any man into visions of suckling them.
This
perfect body of mine is covered in the palest of skin, enfolding some luscious
curves that would put an hourglass to utter shame. I walk on two legs instead
of four. No more tail or hooves. No more horn on my head or whinnies coming
from my muzzle. It’s all so very odd. Yet, it feels so very good, so right. As
if I was born this way with a lifetime of practice, walking on two legs and
swaying my hips to tempt and tease.
The very best part of this human form is two of my limbs have hands. Hands can do so many glorious things! I remember I once used them to explore my own goddess form and I felt everything. The new skin under my fingers felt so hairless and would prickle with bumps when I reached my breasts. My entire frame would also shiver when I touched my nether region.
I want
him to touch me like this. I crave it. He’s never touched me in my dreams. He
always holds his hands, shaped into fists tightly at his sides. As if he’s
afraid that if he touches me, I will disappear. So, he restrains himself.
I do not want restraint. I wish for him to unleash his full passion on my dream self while it is here. No man would ever desire a unicorn’s body to be theirs. To own and worship. No. They desire their own kind. Human flesh and human blood.
Oh, how I wish I was a woman—his woman.
More to come…
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Intriguing, I like the idea of her being the Unicorn maybe one day she will get her wish :)
ReplyDeleteYou'll have to wait and see Cheree ;)
DeleteThank you for coming by and reading <3
Loved it Ava... and?
ReplyDeleteAwesome!!! LOL- You too will have to wait and see M.A. *evil smirk* he he
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My Ava you had me on the edge of my seat, ready to jump into the waterfall it felt that hot. well done eagerly awaiting the next installment
ReplyDeleteJULIE!!! Thank you so much!!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it & came by to read it! Thank you so much for your continuous support <3
DeleteWow I really like this from a Unicorn's point of view. I don't think I have ever read about a Unicorn Paranormal Romance book before. So this is a nice twist. And I am liking what I have read so far......
ReplyDeleteThank you Kathleen! I like to do new and different. It makes it so much more fun for me to just be myself and write what comes to mind. I got the idea for Lady just from the 2 pics above and hope my next prompt enable me to continue the way I have in my mind. I will reveal their actually names soon too. MAYBE in the next installment ;)
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LOVE IT!!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome!!! Thank you for taking the time to read it Brenda <3
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You know how I am with shape shifting equines...so I adore this! I feel like I'm inside her head. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI sure do!! I can't wait to continue on with it :)
DeleteThank you so much Sheri! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
This is such a beautiful story. the idea of an unicorn dreaming of being a goddess is breathless. i wonder if it is a dream or a memory or a premonition. whatever it is it's beautiful and promises a very intersting series of flashes
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Nephylim!
DeleteThank you for reading it and letting me know how you feel. It means a lot to me and I'm now even MORE excited to write more of it :)
Oh honey!!!!! That was some steamy stuff with great imagery. I will await the next part...
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DeleteThank you Ashlynne!
I hope not to disappoint next round. But it is so much fun to write regardless <3
Nice job Ava! Definitely grabbed my attention and I look forward to seeing what you do with this next!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the compliment, stopping by and commenting Renee!
DeleteI look forward to the next as was. I love a fun challenge :)
Holly Molly Ava! I don't think I should have read this while at work... I am squirming in my seat LOL I hope she gets her wish... very different and I want more...
ReplyDeleteLOL- umm... sorry *bats eyelashes innocently*
DeleteI guess you shall just have to wait and see :)
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I loved this Short Story, about a Unicorn who longs to be a woman.The reason for this is because of her Dreams of a Beautiful Perfect Man, who walks into a clear pool of water and strips down,and she longs as any woman would to lick every bit of water from his body. I could honestly feel her every emotion as she envisioned herself as a Goddess, who wants to be his woman. I could feel her pain, when he calls out Lady and she so desperately wants it to be her, because she is so alone, knowing that being a Unicorn, she could never expect that kind of love..This is the beginning of a Beautiful and Touching Love Story, and it must be continued, as I am already looking forward to the next piece and also finding out their Names, which will surely be as Lovely as they are...Once again another Brilliant piece of work by AR Von.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Margie! For taking the time to read my little flash, for stopping by, for your AWESOME words and for leaving such an all around amazing comment for me :)
DeleteI'll not leave you hanging ;)
Very sensual! You melded the desire of the pure white unicorn with the carnal desire for the ultra masculine man in a great way that highlighted the contrast pefectly. I'm big into 'shifter' style stories with fanastical elements like this, so I can't wait to see where you go with it. That is, if you continue to write this story! I'd love to see if the unicorn can manifest her dreams outside of them somehow.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Cia!
DeleteI will be continuing it. Received new prompts and see it happening in my head with at least two of the available prompts. I look forward to sharing it with you all :)
awe, maybe I am a unicorn, or was ...?
ReplyDeletecan't wait to read what happens next
love you too sissy
LOL- You came by!!!!
DeletePart two will be up tomorrow. I had to go a slightly different direction (because the characters told me to in accordance to the prompts), but I think you'll like it ;)
(((hugs & LOVE)))
Will be looking forward to more of this intriguing dream.
ReplyDeleteI love this! Great inspiration for a story, A.R.Von! :)
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